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‎Chapter 16

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‎Chapter 5

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‎Chapter 16

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‎Chapter 16

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‎Chapter 13

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‎Chapter 5

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 ===Correk and Perrom===
 ====Chapter 16====
-Perrom visits the The Gardener See [[The Gardener of the Dark Forest]]), a Wood Elf, who lives in the Dark forest. Perrom confirmed that the Gnome visited the Forest often, barters with the Dark Market and oversees the large tent in the back. Lots of Dark Magic in the Forest, and the animals and birds are on edge. Haven’t been this upset since the time of …. Rhazdon.
+Perrom visits the The Gardener (See [[The Gardener of the Dark Forest]]), a Wood Elf, who lives in the Dark forest. Perrom confirmed that the Gnome visited the Forest often, barters with the Dark Market and oversees the large tent in the back. Lots of Dark Magic in the Forest, and the animals and birds are on edge. Haven’t been this upset since the time of …. Rhazdon.
 ===THE GNOME===

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 Lois and Patsy back in Arlington, talking about bug at meeting. Good job! Glamoured her way in. Watching destruction of old sites I the search for magical objects. Hannah Beecham sending call for help. What’s that about? No one knows, yet.
-Silver Griffins (See [[Order of the Silver Griffins]]
+Silver Griffins (See [[Order of the Silver Griffins]])
 General Anderson visits Silver Griffins in Chicago,. Meets with Lacey Trader, and group of ordinary looking witches and warlocks. The problem? Charlie’s group, and others. “I’m going to speak plainly. I need magical allies in larger numbers who are already trained in calmly holding back a magical arms race. There are a lot of different players messing around with magic who have no background on how to contain or use it properly. That’s not including the decimation to some pretty important historical sites.” But, Feds want their share, as well. We want to work with you, as allies.  Will you help us identify and protect as many sites around the world as possible? In exchange, we’ll negotiate with you fairly and openly to leave many of them untouched.”

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 We’ll open a portal to Earth and stage an accident to someone they all notice, a celebrity. An accident that leaves her briefly at death’s door until one of us magically brings her back to complete health. Send a witch and the Wood Elf. I’m not sure how I feel about harming anyone, a pixie said. It’s a celebrity. Imagine the publicity this will get them. They’ll be set for life.”  Always nice when a plan comes together. Not much longer and I can shed this skin, thought the Gnome, thought the Gnome.
-Also, see "The First Public Contact", Chapter 13
+Also, see "The First Public Contact", Chapter 13, in the book.
 ===THE PDF===

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 ===Correk and Perrom===
 ====Chapter 16====
-Perrom visits the The Gardener, a wood Elf, who lives in the Dark forest. Perrom confirmed that the Gnome visited the Forest often, barters with the Dark Market and oversees the large tent in the back. Lots of Dark Magic in the Forest, and the animals and birds are on edge. Haven’t been this upset since the time of …. Rhazdon.
+Perrom visits the The Gardener See [[The Gardener of the Dark Forest]]), a Wood Elf, who lives in the Dark forest. Perrom confirmed that the Gnome visited the Forest often, barters with the Dark Market and oversees the large tent in the back. Lots of Dark Magic in the Forest, and the animals and birds are on edge. Haven’t been this upset since the time of …. Rhazdon.
 ===THE GNOME===

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 ===THE JERSEY WILLEN===
 ====Chapter 16====
-Leira and Yumfuck go to willen, Correk goes to Oriceran to talk to Perrom, see what he knows, maybe bring him back to Axiom.
+Leira and Yumfuck go to willens, Correk goes to Oriceran to talk to Perrom, see what he knows, maybe bring him back to Axiom.
 Leira in Hilldale, Yumfuck on her shoulder, wearing his cowboy hat. Exchanges for pintas (Hilldale money), to sweeten the pot for the willen. Leira needed information. I need to know how a human corporation is getting seeds from Oriceran. I want you to be there the next time they get in a shipment and tell me exactly who does the delivery. Follow him back to the source. Trust no one.” More importantly, let no one see you, for your sake, just in case a dark force has something to do with all of this. I’ll meet you back here tomorrow for the information.”

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 ====Chapter 13====
 Celebrity Penny Ryan, attacked, saved by beings from Oriceran, who risked all to show themselves to heal her, coming through the portal to do so. Dragon, Tinkerbell fairy also there.
-Katie Trader is told about the “rescue”. Others have started using “magic” to further their own ends – make a fence taller, steal a parking place, controlling their waiter with a wand – Griffins trying to control it, handing out fines. Magic breaking out all over! May and Lacey  go to Lincoln Square, where a group of magical being had been showing off their talents. May begs Lacey to look for Hannah, but Lacey suggests that Patsy and Lois look for her, that she, Lacey, is better needed in other places.
+Katie Trader is told about the “rescue”. Others have started using “magic” to further their own ends – make a fence taller, steal a parking place, controlling their waiter with a wand – Griffins trying to control it, handing out fines. Magic breaking out all over! May and Lacey  go to Lincoln Square, where a group of magical beings had been showing off their talents. May begs Lacey to look for Hannah, but Lacey suggests that Patsy and Lois look for her, that she, Lacey, is better needed in other places.
 Dark magic collecting energy converts to the in between world Eight so far. Growing slowly,, but growing!

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 Leira and Hagan watch Patsy and Lois, in the new office. Lois gives off a stronger pulse than she lets on. They are both hiding in plain sight. Flying Twinkies in, to snack on.
-Suddenly, alarms start ringing! Something as big as Chicago is happening, somewhere. TV screen lights up, as does Leira’s body, arms. Humans, witches, and local government- Necklace has disappeared again. Discovered that Leira can’t read the symbols. Translated for her- (May Sage wounded -etc.). They’re the energy talking to you, looking to guide you. You’re your own virtual screen. These will only appear when you summon them, giving you information about the magic you’re tuning into. Like a heads up.” You need a mentor who can teach you the basics.
+Suddenly, alarms start ringing! Something as big as Chicago is happening, somewhere. TV screen lights up, as does Leira’s body, arms. Humans, witches, and local government- Necklace has disappeared again. Discovered that Leira can’t read the symbols. Translated for her- (May Sage wounded, etc.). They’re the energy talking to you, looking to guide you. You’re your own virtual screen. These will only appear when you summon them, giving you information about the magic you’re tuning into. Like a heads up.” You need a mentor who can teach you the basics.
 ====Chapter 6====