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Kkay at 20:32, 7 October 2018

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‎Chapter Six

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‎Chapter Five

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‎Chapter Five

John.Raisor at 04:32, 6 August 2018

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Kkay at 04:08, 1 August 2018

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John.Raisor at 00:57, 13 July 2018

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Kkay at 20:31, 27 May 2018

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 ====KING PYRO BOUNTY====
 ====Chapters 7, 8, 9, 10, 11====
-TUMB 02/7   Blackstone looked in Bounty Lists for a job – chose Jordan Adams, “King Pyro”, a Level Four classification. a run-of-the-mill bank robber until two years prior, when he’d gotten his grubby paws on the distilled essence of a fire spirit in a potion which  gave the man the power to control and manipulate fire. Goes to grubby bar, the Black Sun, to talk to the bartender, Tyler, to get info on King Pyro. Tyler refuses to give him any info on any Level Fours or higher. Too dangerous, so Blackstone goes away.
+TUMB 02/7   Blackstone looked in Bounty Lists for a job – chose Jordan Adams, “King Pyro”, a Level Four classification. a run-of-the-mill bank robber until two years prior, when he’d gotten his grubby paws on the distilled essence of a fire spirit in a potion which  gave the man the power to control and manipulate fire. Goes to grubby bar, the Black Sun, to talk to the bartender, Tyler, to get info on King Pyro. Tyler refuses to give him any info on any Level Fours or higher. Too dangerous, so Brownstone goes away.
 TUMB 02/8  King Pyro comes to bar, meets Tyler,, the bartender.  Tyler tells him that Brownstone had been in earlier looking for him, and to get out of town. Pyro determines that he is King, and he will kill Brownstone first.

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 ====Chapter Six====
 In the Leanan Sídhe, two spies wait for Brownstone. Father O’Banion warns them not to cause trouble, they tell “the old drunk” to go away. Father has done his duty. Father calls and cancels his meeting with Shay and James that night.
-The Professor wanted Shay and James to go after the Green Dragon Crescent Blade (See Miscellaneous), perhaps in Mexico.
+The Professor wanted Shay and James to go after the Green Dragon Crescent Blade (See Weapons, [[Green Dragon Crescent Blade]]), perhaps in Mexico.
 James looks at his favorite show, Barbecue Wars: New Generation. T
 There was a discussion of the competition results from using different meats, barks, and rubs, some from Oriceran. Good discussion on BBQing! Left James wondering if he had any Oriceran background, and about his necklace. Maybe he couldn’t control a lot of things in his life, but at least he’d always have barbecue.
 ====KING PYRO BOUNTY====

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 ====Chapter Five====
-Shay and Brownstone take Alison to the Magic School. Lots of explanations and descriptions (See Locations, [[School of Necessary Magic][) Shay cries when they leave, Brownstone will miss her. Brownstone approaches her on working with him on newest artifact thing for The Professor, she agrees.
+Shay and Brownstone take Alison to the Magic School. Lots of explanations and descriptions (See Locations, [[School of Necessary Magic]]) Shay cries when they leave, Brownstone will miss her. Brownstone approaches her on working with him on newest artifact thing for The Professor, she agrees.
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-Shay and Brownstone take Alison to the Magic School. Lots of explanations and descriptions (See Locations –  School of Necessary Magic) Shay cries when they leave, Brownstone will miss her. Brownstone approaches her on working with him on newest artifact thing for The Professor, she agrees.
+Shay and Brownstone take Alison to the Magic School. Lots of explanations and descriptions (See Locations, [[School of Necessary Magic][) Shay cries when they leave, Brownstone will miss her. Brownstone approaches her on working with him on newest artifact thing for The Professor, she agrees.
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 Parent’s week-end coming up, they’ll both go. Brownstone gives Alison her Aegis Pendant, to protect her from harm. You activate it by wanting to be protected and saying ‘Aegis aeon.’  Once you do that, it’ll form a magic shell right around your body. It can take a decent punishment, magical or physical, but I wouldn’t stare down an angry dragon.” James tapped his head. “It’s important to have both the words and the intent when you use it. It won’t work without both. Use it if needed, and will need to be recharged if used.”
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 A day in the park. Brownstone paid back the favor he owed Trey by guaranteeing safety at a family/community day in the park. No guns, all peace, or will answer to Brownstone.

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	Brownstone showed up at the Taco place the next day, minus the head, and properly identified Brownstone as the taker. Discusses Sombra’s history in great detail, and the Mexican Government’s attitude towards lawbreakers. Leave them alone unless they cause too much trouble.		Brownstone showed up at the Taco place the next day, minus the head, and properly identified Brownstone as the taker. Discusses Sombra’s history in great detail, and the Mexican Government’s attitude towards lawbreakers. Leave them alone unless they cause too much trouble.
	The tacos were fantastic !		The tacos were fantastic !
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		+	====Chapter 20====
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		+	Brownstone leaves that day to get back to LA, spend the night in his own bed. Gets to his house. Only been gone a couple of days, but it felt like it had been weeks. Decides to just rest for a couple of days.
		+	Hears a knock on the door. Was Trey, his gang friend, wanting to share some shit with him. Not drugs, other shit.
		+	Trey wants Brownstone to help take care of the neighborhood. Trey and his gang can control the little stuff, but Trey wants it known that if anything deserves it, Brownstone will be on their backs.
		+	Brownstone agrees, somewhat. “I’m willing to do something for the community,” James offered. “As long as they’re willing to do shit for me. This doesn’t mean I’m running around the neighborhood solving everyone’s problems. I’m a bounty hunter. I’m just saying that I know how to repay debts.” James’ gaze flicked to the empty area where Leeroy’s bowls used to sit. “And too much trouble in the neighborhood makes my life complicated.”
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		+	====Chapter 21====
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		+	Brownstone checks on the stock deal he had done for Father McCartney. It apparently worked well. Doubled plus, then someone sold 10,000 shares, so plummeted again, but never to below original start price. Brownstone pleased. Talks with Father about having Sombra die when he touched James. Was James some kind of a monster? That people died when they touched him? No, it was a miracle! Don’t question it. James went away somewhat comforted.
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		+	====Chapter 22====
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		+	BBQ Time! All about Jessie Rae’s in Las Vegas. The whole chapter. A real place. Just go and try it out ! !
		+	Brownstone and Michael, the owner, also discuss how BBQ tastes are changing, with the introduction of Oriceran flavors, and an elf girl winning the contest on TV. As Michael (owner) says, “Whole world’s changed in a lot bigger ways than just barbecue. Just got to go with the flow.”
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		+	====Chapter 23====
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		+	One of Trey’s boys stopped James as he was driving back into the neighborhood, told him about a weird car watching his place. “Nothin’ until earlier today. That’s when this black SUV with tinted windows rolled into the hood. I ain’t ever seen that piece of shit around here before.” He gestured up the street. “They been three blocks up from your crib since fucking lunch, man.” “You tell Trey the community just did me a favor, and I don’t forget people who do me favors.”
		+	DelRoy and Greg, in the car talking, find Brownstone outside their car, gun in hand, motioning for the window to be opened. They are cops, hoping to be better aware or Brownstone’s doings, and to make sure he was not involved in anything illegal. As they talk, they get an APB that king Pyro has escaped. Brownstone wants a bounty on him, tells the cops that, and takes off, to hunt him again.
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		+	====KING PYRO AGAIN====
		+	====Chapters 24, 25, 26====
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		+	TUMB 02/24 Brownstone goes to Warehouse, gets necklace. Still worried about using it, but best to fight ones like Pyro and Sombra with powers like they used. Trying something new- covering the back of the amulet/pendant with sticky paper, so that it didn’t touch his skin. Put the necklace on, didn’t feel usual sensations, or the voice whispering to him. He could always pull off the paper if he needed the extra strength.
		+	Goes to Zoe’s front door, for more potions. Zoe tells him of gossip from the magical community. The kemana down south has been reporting sightings of new elves; dark ones. “If that doesn’t concern you, don’t worry about it. But you do have a bad habit of pissing people off, and your name comes up more often than you might think. Just...don’t get killed, James.” Traded her a one carat diamond ring for the potions.
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		+	TUMB 02/25 Goes to Dark Sun bar to warn Tyler. Sees TV newscast, showing motorcyclist setting fire to cars, buildings as he goes by. Brownstone surmises that Adams will really want to rob a bank, having led the police to another area. They wouldn’t bother him if he wasn’t there. So Brownstone goes to a bank he knows exists just a few miles from his last-known location. As Brownstone is searching the bank, Pyro bursts the front door open with flame and shattering glass. Brownstone pivoted behind a pillar, pulling the paper off the back of his amulet as he watched King Pyro, cloaked in flame, stroll into the lobby, sneering at the cowering people against the walls. “Tell me where the vault is in the next thirty seconds or you’ll all burn.”
		+	The security Guard tried to shoot hi down, was burned to death for his trouble. Brownstone came from behind pillar, shot at him, bullets melted before they got to him, so was now effectively bulletproof. Also knife proof and grenade proof. The two will go hand-to-hand.
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		+	TUMB 02/26 As fireballs kept coming his way, Brownstone dodged to the side. His entire body ached, and he had wounds and burns all over. The amulet necklace had saved his life and protected him from the worst of his enemy’s attacks, but it hadn’t completely saved him from harm. James charged and slammed his fist at full strength into King Pyro’s chest. The other man flew backward, smashing through a front window and crashing into the street. King Pyro laughed as he hopped to his feet with blood running down his face. “A god can’t be killed by a man, bitches!” A fireball blasted toward a nearby police cruiser, but the cops behind it fled just in time. The car exploded, raining down parts. Other officers rushed backward, even the AET members. Brownstone and Pyro fight, pyro’s skull eventually getting pounded into the pavement. Brownstone went back to truck, changed into clean clothes, and talked to Mack, the friendly cop. A changing world, and not all approve of it. Scared to have people around as powerful as Brownstone. But it would be Ok.
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		+	====Chapter 27====
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		+	James meets with the Professor, Shay gets paid, Brownstone receives Alison’s present, a magical necklace.
		+	Parent’s week-end coming up, they’ll both go. Brownstone gives Alison her Aegis Pendant, to protect her from harm. You activate it by wanting to be protected and saying ‘Aegis aeon.’ Once you do that, it’ll form a magic shell right around your body. It can take a decent punishment, magical or physical, but I wouldn’t stare down an angry dragon.” James tapped his head. “It’s important to have both the words and the intent when you use it. It won’t work without both. Use it if needed, and will need to be recharged if used.”
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		+	Epilogue:
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		+	A day in the park. Brownstone paid back the favor he owed Trey by guaranteeing safety at a family/community day in the park. No guns, all peace, or will answer to Brownstone.
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		+	They all asked, “Trey’s your family?”
		+	“When you are inside these fences with no weapons, you’re my family. At least for today.”
		+	“Today we family,” Trey agreed. “Tomorrow shit is real again, motherfuckers.”
		+	“For one fucking day, we all know life will be safe.”
		+	James looked around. “That it will, Trey. That it will.”
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